学科网(北京)股份有限公司 专题48 书面表达—观点看法类 【2022年】 (一)(2022·湖北十堰·中考真题) 假设你叫李华,即将从初中毕业。请你根据下面表格中的信息给校长写一封信,谈谈你对学校的一些看法。 优点 不足 优秀的老师 课外活动少 友好的同学 休息时间短 美丽的校园 …… 你的建议…… 提示词:schoolyard校园 要求:1.短文应涵盖上述所有内容,可适当发挥。 2.行文连贯,条理清楚,语句通顺,书写规范。 3.不得在文中出现学校名称和人名。 4.词数80-100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数。 Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,I am writing to show my sincere gratitude to you for the progress I have made in the past three years. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 Best wishes. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster, I am writing to show my sincere gratitude to you for the progress I have made in the past three years. I am writing to tell you some things that have affected our school life. There are many advantages in our school. We have excellent teachers and friendly classmates. Our schoolyard is beautiful and big. But there are still some problems. First of all, we are faced with endless homework every day. Some students have to stay up very late to deal with it, which makes us have less rest time. Secondly, as we all know, colorful out-of-class activities are of great importance to our healthy growth, but we can hardly spare time to participate in them. In my opinion, we should have more free time to balance our study and life. We should have more colorful and meaningful activities. Best wishes. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【解析】 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 【详解】 1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容,写信给校长谈谈学校的优点与不足,注意要