人教版直击中考英语七大写作问题专题辅导.doc

直击中考英语七大写作问题
　　写作是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型，也是中考中失分较多的一题。不少考生在练****英语写作时不得法，又苦于找不到提高的有效途径。纵观近年各地中考英语写作题，题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说，不同的写作题材，它的人物，时间，写作的重点也是不尽相同的，但学生在写作过程中所犯的错误却基本一致。笔者在批阅中考英语作文中发现诸多考生的作文出现了这样那样的问题，我们先看下面考生的作文. 
    例： （山东枣庄）以“Chinese Spring Festival”为题，写一篇短文。
■ 考生作文  
Chinese Spring Festival
    The Spring Festival is China’s importantest① festival． It’s the longest holidays②. Most people go back home to get together with their families③．
    Before the festival，people are busy prepare④ for it- buying things and cleaning the houses．On the night⑤，the whole family usually celebrate it，for example，they always playing firecrackers，eating delicious foods， watching TV and playing mah-jong  and so on．During the festival, they visit friends and relatives, saying “Happy New Year” to each other，and go to park or temple fairs together .People also put on new clothes，and they say “Happy New Year” to each other，visit friends and relatives and go to park or temple fairs⑥． On New Year’s Day , people often eat delicious food jiaozi. Jiaozi can be made by most people including the old and the kids。
    I like jiaozi very much．What about you？
■ 综合点评
    这份作文能抓住要点，介绍出春节以及表达出个人感受，但在行文过程中出现了一些语法和语言表达等方面的错误，这些也是同学们经常犯的错误。
    ①处是典型的中式英语，另外还有一处典型的语法错误，“important”最高级应为：“the most important”。所以，这句话正确说法应该是：“The Spring Festival is the most important festival in Chin