考点47 书面表达之叙事描写类 叙事描写类的书面表达是以叙述和描写为主要表达方式,以写人、叙事和经历、写物、绘景等为主要内容的文体: 这一类的书面表达动词使用率最高,且富于变化,用得最多的是动词的过去时态,其他各种时态为辅。合理使用丰富多彩的动词时态是这类书面表达的首要语言特征。人物类书面表达如果是对人的性格、外貌等叙述常用一般现在时,如果通过事件来刻画人物的性格,那么就要用过去时。写好这类书面表达要注意以下几点: 1. 头绪分明,脉络清楚 写好书面表达,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都要围绕五个"W"和一个"H"来展开,分别是why, what, when, where, who及how。 2. 突出中心,详略得当 在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的一步。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写或粗述那些非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而会使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。 3. 用活语言,准确生动 记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的叙事描写类书面表达的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事物描写得具体生动。 1. Among various kinds of things/persons in my mind ... is the most unforgettable one. 2. On a sunny/rainy morning, while I was...First of all... Then ... After that... In the end ... 3. He/she/this was one of the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable persons/things that I have ever met/ experienced, I will remember him/her forever. 加分句子: 1. Sth impressed me greatly... 2. What impressed me most is that... 经典句型: 1. Last Sunday(Saturday...), it was sunny(rainy, windy, foggy) 2. I got up very early (late). After breakfast I went to with my friends by bike, bus... 3. We enjoyed ourselves. 4. We forgot the time. We didn’t come back until 5 o’clock. 5. We all felt very tired, but we were happy. 6. I thought I would never forget this trip. 7. Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays. 8. We visited a lot of places of interest. 9. We had a good time there. 10. We bought a lot of things. The clothes here are good and cheap. 人物类书面表达主要通过刻画人物性格,塑造人物形象,反映生活,表现主题,模版如下: 开门见山,引出要介绍的人物 正文(时间、地点、人物……) 感想 I will never forget my English teacher…She is a beautiful woman… It was…o’clock, I did…in… I realize that… 叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。 写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结构,模版如下: 介绍景观 介绍旅行经历 总结旅行感受 … is one of the most beautiful scenery spots. I volunteered a guide