人教版19 动物世界2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）.docx

19 动物世界
2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）
相关话题精彩范文引路
（一）
Dolphin
Have you ever seen dolphins? Are you fascinated by them?
The dolphins live in the ocean. And they are cute and beautiful. They not only swim fast, they are also smart, They are often in gray color. Besides, they are good at swimming and jumping in the ocean. They are also friendly animals. They look like fish, but they actually are mammals. Because they are able to learn things very quickly, dolphins can be trained by people. So now, we can often see the dolphin show in the aquarium,
They are so friendly. I love them very much.
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海豚
你见过海豚吗?你有没有被它们吸引呢?
海豚生活在海洋里。它们又可爱，又美丽。它们不仅游得快，而且很聪明。它们通常是灰色的。除此之外，它们擅长在海洋里游泳和跳跃。它们也是一一种友好的动物。 它们看起来像鱼，但它们是哺乳动物。因为它们学东西很快，人们可以训练海豚。 所以现在，我们可以经常在水族馆看到海豚表演。
它们非常友好。我非常喜欢它们。
亮点词汇
fascinate 使着迷;吸引
ocean大海;海洋
smart聪明的;机智的
mammal哺乳动物
aquarium 水族馆
出彩句型
Are you fascinated by them?你被它们吸引了吗?
They not only...，but also...他们不......而.....
They are often in.. color.它们通常......色。
They are good at... 它们擅长.....
They look lek...它们看起来像......
高分点评
本文描写的是海豚这一种动物， 主要抓住了它的活动方式进行展开，显示出了海豚可爱、可人的特点。文章的开头别具-格， 使用了两个问句，吸引读者注意力的同时，拉近了与读者的距离。其次，文章的逻辑承接较好，如"besides" "because”"so"等词的使用，将句与句之间的关系清楚地体现了出来。
（二）
Tortoise
Tortoise is a cute animal. It doesn't walk very fast, but it always attracts people' s attention.
It has a short tail, four short feet, a little hea