人教版15 自然风光 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）.docx

15 自然风光
2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）
相关话题范文解析引路
（一）
The Yellow Mountain
The Yellow Mountain is located in the south of Anhui Province. It is one of the most well-known mountains
in China. Every year, thousands of tourists at home and abroad come to visit it.
It's a little far from the city. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus. Climbing the mountain may make you a little tired. However, on the way to the top of the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.
You would be amazed by the wonderful scenery there. It is really worth visiting.
参考译文
黄山
黄山位于安徽省的南部。它是中国的名山之一。 每年，成千上万的中外游客去那里游览。它离市区有点远。坐汽车的话，大概要3个小时才能到达那里。爬山可能会使你有点累。然而，在向山顶前进的过程中，你可以欣赏环绕着你的云海、奇松和怪石。清晨，当太阳升起来时，天空看起来非常美丽。
你会惊讶于那里的美丽景色。它真的很值得去游玩。
亮点词汇
1.thousands of成千上万的
2.at home and abroad海内外;中外
3.tired 疲倦的;劳累的
4.unique 独特的;独一无二的
5.amaze 使惊讶;感到惊讶
出彩句型
1.... is located in... ...位于.....
2.It is one of the most well-known...它是最著名.....之..。
3.It takes yo... to do sth.这会花费...... (时间等)去做某事。
4.On the way t.... you can... 在...的路上，你可以...
5.It is worth doing sth.值得做某事。
高分点评
本文围绕中国的一座名山一黄山展开， 介绍了它的概况、云海、奇松、怪石、日出等，呈现出绝美的山上奇景。作者的文笔非常出色，"sea of clouds" "unique rocks"等表达惟妙惟肖地展现了黄山之景。文中的句式多变，如“it”引导的形式主语句、动词的-ing形式作主语等，都是文章的加分点。
（二）
Beihai