人教版24 物品介绍 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）.docx

24 物品介绍
2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）
相关话题素材储备与写作示例指导
对物品物件的描写般包括物品本身的内容、功他、特点等基本信息，并且该物品住往和某个人或者某次经历有关，对作者有着特别的意义和重要性。学生需要在写作中进行客观的描述和主观的评价。
实践案例1
题目
Write a short passage in at least 60 words about the topic The best gift I’ve received
审题
这是一篇全命题的说明文，要求学生对“收到的最好礼物”进行描述说明。写作时可以围绕what is the gift，what is it like" ，"why do you like it"和"what make it special"这几个问题展开。首先写明最好的礼物是什么，该礼物来自谁等基术信息。其次，可以对礼物的特点进行简要描写。特别需要注意的是，本文非常重要的内容应该是点明为什么这是最好的礼物，即说明该礼物的特殊意义和重要性。
段落结构
本文的结构相对灵活，建议采用三段式，即“总一分总” 的写作结构:
●第一段(开头):引出话题，写明收到最好的礼物是什么。
.第二段(中心段):文章的中心部分。依次说明礼物的特点、对“我“的意义等。●第三段(结尼):文章的结尾段，对全文进行总结，对礼物的意义进行适当的升华。
mean a lot to sb.对某人很有意义
give me sth. as a birthday present给我...作为生日礼物
.encourage sb. to do鼓励某人做......
the symbol of friendship友谊的象征
remind sb. of sth.使......想起......
keep and cherish sth. forever永远保存珍惜.....
参考句型
I have never received a better gift before.我从未收到过更好的礼物。
It has accompanied me for almost ... years.它已经陪伴我.....年.
.Whenever look at he it, I will think of the old happy days.
每当我看到这个礼物，我就会想起过去的快乐日子。
Wherever I go, I always take it with me无论我走到哪里，我都带着它。
****作1
Among all the gifts I have received, the one I like best is a hand made calendar.
It was made by my best friend Jane. She was my my best friend in the junior high school. She gave it to me when we graduated. On each page of the calendar，there is a picture of lane and me with some words written by her.
She tells me how she feels about our friendship and encourages me to try my bet and live a happy life. Whenever I’ll look at the calendar. I am touched by something warm, and my heart is filled with love.
The calendar is a memory of the wonderful time we spent together in junior high school. I will keep this special gift forever.
点评:
这篇****作行文流畅，感情真挚动人。对于礼物“日历”的描写比较详细具体，使更得读者能够体会作者的情感。同时，这篇****作结构完整，句式较为丰富，作者使用了定语从人句、宾语从句、时间状语从句、被动语态、非谓语等，使全文读来流畅生动。****作2
People give gifts to each other to show their love and friendship. For many years, I've a