人教版18 树木花草2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）.docx

18 树木花草
2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）
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（一）
My Favorite Plant
My favorite plant is the Lucky Bamboo. I was attracted by it when I first saw it. It is always green and easy to plant. It is also slim and tall.
At first, I thought if I could give it enough water, it would grow quickly. However, a month later, I found the leaves were still the same size as when I got the plant. I asked my grandma why the bamboo couldn't grow up. She told me that the Lucky Bamboo needs a lot of sunshine. So I moved it to my table by the window sat once. Now it is growing bigger and stronger. And it seems to be greener and greener.
Thanks to the Lucky Bamboo, it brings me more fresh air and makes my room look nicer.
参考译文
我最喜欢的植物
我最喜欢的植物是富贵竹。当我第一一次看到它时，就被它吸引住了。它四季常绿，并且很容易种植。它又瘦又高。
开始， 我认为，只要给予它足够的水分， 它就可以长得很快。然而，一个月过去了，我发现叶子还是一一样的大小， 就像我刚得到这棵植物时一样。 我问奶奶，为什么富贵竹长不大。她告诉我，富贵竹需要很多的阳光。所以我马上将它移到了窗边的桌子上。现在它长得又大又强壮。它看起来也越来越绿了。
感谢富贵竹，它带给了我很多新鲜空气的同时，还让我的房间变得更漂亮了。
亮点词汇
bamboo 竹子
grow up成长，长大
At once立刻，马上
出彩句型
slim苗条的
I was attracted by...我..吸.引。
.. is/ are sill the same size as... ...还是....一样的大小。
It seems to be... 它似乎......
高分点评
本文是一篇较为成功的状物文章，围绕着富贵竹这一植物， 分别从其颜色、形状、大小展开，随后辅之以作者的种植经验，从各个角度展现了富责竹的特点。文章的词句描写非常具体详细，如'easy to plant" "slim"等，形象展示出了富贵竹独有的特点。
（二）
Tomatoes
The tomatoes are very common, but they have some special characteristics.
The