高中英语人教第21讲 书面表达（讲）-（教案）.docx

第21讲 书面表达 （讲）
【考纲考情】
书面表达命题形式灵活多样，以提纲类作文为主要命题形式，提示内容较为简洁，体裁和题材相对稳定，以应用文为主。渗透中国元素，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，体现立德树人的时代特征，促进德智体美劳全面发展，倡导健康生活理念。
【考点梳理】
第一部分 高分亮点
一、使用吸引眼球的亮点词汇
要想写出一篇水平比较高的书面表达，高级词汇的使用必不可少，它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：
　（一）使用亮点词汇的四种方法　
1．标新立异　“语”众不同
在写作时，恰当地使用一些别人可能意想不到的词汇或表达，会体现出自己的高水平。
①Our team, besides regular training, will join in a variety of activities.
→Our team, apart/aside from regular training, will join in a variety of activities.
②Several days later, when the video was played at the graduation ceremony, it was very popular.
→Several days later, when the video was played at the graduation ceremony, it was well­received.
2．多样表达　避免重复
在写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的单词或短语，要尽量用贴切、多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。
③We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have different ways to deal with such a situation.
→We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.
④We've built a new experiment building and we've also built a library where the old playground used to be.
→We've built a new experiment building and we've also set up a library where the old playground used to be.
3．单词短语　短语优先
在单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出扎实的语言功底。
⑤There is no doubt that you should know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.
→There is no doubt that you are supposed to know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.
⑥Firstly, the final exam of this term is coming so I am busy preparing for it.
→To begin with, the final exam of this term is around the corner so I am busy preparing for it.
⑦I hear that he is ill, and I decide to visit him this Sunday.
→I hear that he is ill, and I decide to pay a visit to him this Sunday.
4．用高级词汇取代简单词汇
为了表现语言功底，显示写作水平，应尽量避免反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。
⑧I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
→I should make an apology for being unable