考向37 读后续写之如何构思故事情节 读后续写的情节构思是续写成功与否的关键点之一。而在续写中,侧面描写的作用不容忽视。运用侧面描写,可以对人物进行多角度映照和多层次烘托,人物的描写就会达到“横看成岭侧成峰”的丰富境界。 侧面描写有“以旁面写正面”、“以对面写正面”、“以反面写正面”三种方法。如果从一个侧面去描写,人物形象往往单薄。如果从多个侧面去描写,人物形象就容易丰满。在写作中,我们可以尝试以下几种侧面烘托法:景物烘托法——通过对自然景物的描绘,来烘托人物心情;他人反映法——听听他人的反映,去了解主人公的个性特征;借人写人法——通过对受影响者的刻画,间接地表现主人公的思想品质。 一、情节拓展方法1:选择关键词 1.关键词语 blow 吹 howl 咆哮 crash 碰撞 stir 搅动 darken 使变黑 envelope 信封,包裹 gloomy 阴郁的 dip 蘸 pour 泼 sunshine /sunlight 阳光 breeze 微风 dim 昏暗的 faint 微弱的 winding 蜿蜒的 frighten 是某人害怕 chilling 寒冷的 thunder 雷,打雷 lightening 闪电 frosty 寒冷的 melt 融化 2.常用短语 be bathed in 沐浴在 amber-like sunshine 琥珀色的阳光 stretch off 延伸 凉爽清新的风cool and refreshing breeze 落日the setting sun stroll down the street在街上漫步 the first ray of sunlight第一缕阳光 flood into涌入 gentle breeze微风 多雨的季节a rainy season 暴风雨之夜a stormy night 在茫茫大雨中in the blinding rain 在春天温暖的阳光里 in the warm spring sunshine 难以忍受的热unbearable hot 放晴了clear up 木日光浴bathe in the sunshine 一个偏僻的小村庄 a small village off the map 离海滨仅咫尺之遥 be dotted with 点缀着 二、情节拓展方法2:景色特征烘托人物心情 (一)阳光明媚的景色烘托生命美好与心情的愉悦 【典例赏析】 The beach to your right stretches off(延伸) to the horizon, slowly narrowing to nothingness(虚无), only to re-emerge(重新出现) again on your left. When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin. The sun dropped through and laid on his head and shoulders.太阳下山,温和的光线落在肩头。 When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flooded in. 阳光倾斜而入 The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks. 天气晴朗,碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。 I was immediately stunned by the azure sky with thick silver lining clouds drifting around. 我立刻被湛蓝色的天空和成群飘动的金色云朵所吸引了。 White clouds flow in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in broad ocean. A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain. 一阵风吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条,就像那卷起的窗帘。 The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled (撒、点缀)the slope. 风,轻柔而清冷,轻点这树枝,搅动着斜坡下的零星