专题 36 读后续写 备考2023年高考英语二轮复****讲练测--讲练 命题解读 读后续写的命题形式为:提供一段350词左右的与语言材料,据该材料内容、所给两段段落开头语进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节合理、完整的短文。该题型具有一定的开放性,考生需用自己的语言对故事情节进行内容创造;按照可合理的方向续写,使文章结构完整,结构条理清晰;细节描写生动,具有矛盾冲突、心理描写等都让故事更加立体饱满。 写作步骤 读懂文章 审清题目 谋篇布局 初步草稿 定稿 时间安排 1. 原文阅读(建议时长3-5min) 2. 信息梳理(建议时长3-5min) 3. 潜心构思(建议时长3-5min) 4. 初稿勾勒(建议时长10-15min) 5. 润色提升(建议时长5-8min) 6. 定稿誊写(建议时长5-7min) 典例分析 真题典例 (2022年全国高考新高考I卷读后续写) It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route(路线)through thick evergreen forest. I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn't with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run. What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event! I quickly searched the crowd for the school's coach and asked him what had happened. "I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him," he explained uncomfortably. "I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide." I bit back my frustration(懊恼). I knew the coach meant well — he thought he was do