人教高考英语复习 第1组　组合练(三)　写作组合规范练　短文改错＋书面表达.docx

组合练(三)　写作组合规范练　短文改错＋书面表达
Ⅰ.短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
John went to shop but forgot to bring a shopping bag.But he bought one.Just then an idea struck him which he might use the old trousers to make the bag.He began to do it immediate he arrived home.It was hard works for him, but he finally made it.His family was amazing at his hand-made bag.When asked what he felt about his creation, John replied：“This is the first time that I had such a wonderful experience.” He added up that it was helpful to improve the ability to make things by hand.“It not only brings us pleasure but avoid spending unnecessary money as well.”
答案　
John went to shop but forgot to bring a shopping bag. he bought one.Just then an idea struck him he might use the old trousers to make bag.He began to do it he arrived home.It was hard for him, but he finally made it.His family was at his hand-made bag.When asked he felt about his creation, John replied: “This is the first time that I had such a wonderful experience.” He added up that it was helpful to improve the ability to make things by hand.“It not only brings us pleasure but spending unnecessary money as well.”
Ⅱ.书面表达
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，收到了正在学中文的外国朋友Chris送给你的马克·吐温的一本