第2讲 解题技法指导
技法一 审题谋篇四步法
(2022·全国甲)
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.海洋的重要性;
2.保护海洋的倡议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Our Oceans,Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.
第一步 审题立意 布局谋篇
体裁
投稿短文
时态
一般现在时
人称
第三人称
结构
三段
要点
1.开头提出话题。
2.中间写海洋的重要性和如何保护海洋。
3.最后发出倡议。
第二步 核心内容 逐一盘点
第一段——提出话题
1.当说到海洋时,它的污染正变得越来越严重。
When it comes to the ocean,its pollution is becoming more and more serious.
第二段——海洋的重要性和保护海洋的倡议
2.海洋在世界上起着关键性的作用。
The ocean plays a key role in our world.
3.海洋向我们提供充足的食物并维持着自然的平衡。
The ocean offers us sufficient food and maintains the balance of nature.
4.我们不能把垃圾扔进海洋。
We can’t throw garbage into the ocean.
5.我们也可以分发传单来号召更多的人保护海洋。
We can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean.
6.如果更多的人参与,海洋环境就会更好了。
If more people are involved,the ocean environment will be better.
第三段——发出倡议
7.早该到了我们致力于保护海洋的时候了。
It is high time that we devoted/should devote ourselves to protecting the ocean.
8.保护海洋就是保护我们自己。
To protect the ocean is to protect ourselves.
第三步 斟词酌句 润色升级
1.用not only...but also...改写第3句话。
Not only does the ocean offer us sufficient food,but it also maintains the balance of nature.
2.把第4句话改为被动语态。
Garbage can’t be thrown into the ocean.
3.把第6句话改为“the more...,the more...”结构。
The more people are involved,the better the ocean environment is.
第四步 巧妙衔接 完美成篇
Our Oceans,Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.When it comes to the ocean,its pollution is becoming more and more serious.World Oceans Day is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
The ocean plays a key role in our world.Not only does the ocean offer us sufficient food,but it also maintains the balance of nature.Thus,it is imperative to protect the ocean.First of all,what we can do is place importance on our daily actions.For example,