人教高考英语复习 读后续写课堂讲义 环境渲染优秀表达素材.docx

读后续写-环境渲染优秀表达
例一Para 1
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
(增加细节描写it was dark)
-The sun hid himself behind the mountains, making it hard to see
anything in the thick darkness. 太阳躲在山后，在黑暗中什么也看不见。
例二Para2
We had no idea where we were and it got dark.
(增加细节描写it got dark)
-Silence between Dad and me made me more nervous and scared. At that moment, it was completely dark except the faint light given out by
a few stars in the sky． 爸爸和我之间的沉默让我更加紧张和害怕。那一刻，天空一片漆黑，只有几颗星星发出微弱的光。
例三 Para2
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the
way. （增加细节描写 saw lots of great sights )
-I chose my eyes in the speeding car. Winding rivers, lofty mountains, deep valleys and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascination.
我把目光投向了飞驰的汽车。蜿蜒的河流、巍峨的山脉、深谷和阳光明媚的海滩
完全让我着迷。
1. lighten up the cloudless sky 照亮无云的天空
2. falling leaves in the cool mid-autumn air 凉爽中秋空气中的落叶
3. Snow blanked every rooftop and weighed on the branches of the stunted mulberry trees.
雪花覆盖了每一个屋顶，矮小的菜葚树枝上也堆满了积雪。
4. The night brought an unrelenting darkness that wrapped their eyes and mouths, burying them beneath a starless sky.
夜晚带来了一片无情的黑暗，包裹着他们的眼睛和嘴巴，把他你温没布一片没5. A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.
一股浓郁的泥士般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。
6. As the night advanced, the clouds closing in and densely overspreading t