人教高考英语复习 短文改错＋书面表达.docx

组合练(十二)　写作组合规范练　短文改错＋书面表达
Ⅰ.短文改错
(2022·安徽宣城调研)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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答案　
In your email，you me for some suggestions about how to have a healthy family.Here is my advice.Generally ，a healthy family needs efforts of every family member.First，it is that parents should treat their children equally， is important for the family.What’s more，children parents can benefit from having some day-to-day routines.In the addition，every member should give other right expectations.Finally，you should love own family life.In a word，if you want to own a healthy fa