考向49 应用文写作之申请信和告知信
申请信
【写作示例】
假定你是李华, 暑假在伦敦学****得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者, 内容包括:
1. 写信目的; 2. 个人优势; 3. 能做的事情。
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
【考场审题】
Step 1: 精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
I(Li Hua), Sir/Madam
时态
一般现在时, 一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题: 问候并说明写信的原因及目的
主体段落: 分两点阐述为什么申请做志愿者: 个人优势; 能做的事情
结尾: 衷心的祝愿
Step 2: 头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词: apply for position, be qualified for, as follows, specific introduction, furthermore, share. . . with. . .
(2)佳句:
①Hearing the Chinese painting exhibition is to be held, I’m writing this letter to apply for a volunteer position.
②The reasons why I’m qualified for the job are as follows.
③Furthermore, I can speak fluent Chinese and English at the same time, making it no problem for me to help visitors from all over the world.
④If I’m chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them.
Step 3: 斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1: 我有一些胜任这份工作的原因。
一般表达: I have some reasons to be qualified for the job.
句式升级(定语从句)
我胜任这份工作的原因如下。
The reasons why I’m qualified for the job are as follows.
要点2: 如果你们给我这份工作, 我将尽最大努力去帮助参观者。
一般表达: If you give me this job, I will do my best to help the visitors.
句式升级(被动语态, 虚拟语气)
如果我能当选成为一名志愿者, 我有能力去帮助参观者理解绘画作品, 并与他们分享那些中国画背后的历史。
If I’m chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them.
Step 4: 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student having education in London now. Hearing the Chinese painting exhibition is to be held, I’m writing this letter to apply for a volunteer position.
The reasons why I’m qualified for the job are as follows. Firstly, I have had an interest in Chinese painting ever since I was a child. Therefore, I am familiar with this art form and can give very specific introduction to the visitors. Furthermore, I can speak fluent Chinese and English at the