考向50 应用文写作之咨询信和推荐信
咨询信
【写作示例】
假定你是李华, 打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel America国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询, 内容如下:
1. 请其推荐合适的旅游路线;
2. 请其告知相关的旅游费用。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【考场审题】
Step 1: 精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
第一人称 (I), 第二人称(you)
时态
一般现在时
段落布局
开头点题: 说明写信目的
主体段落: 说明需要咨询的内容
结尾: 期待对方的回信
Step 2: 头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词: inquire, recommend, in addition, intend, appreciate
(2)佳句:
①I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.
②In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.
Step 3: 斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1: 我打算在美国住10天左右, 希望能看一看那些独特的自然风景, 品味一下当地的风俗。
一般表达: I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, and I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.
句式升级(定语从句)
I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.
要点2: 除此之外, 我想了解包括所有旅行费用的路线的价格。
一般表达: In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, and all the traveling expenses.
句式升级(分词短语作定语)
In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.
Step 4: 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m planning to travel to the USA in the coming July. Therefore, I’m writing to inquire about travel routes of your agency.
I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs. So, could you please recommend some suitable travel routes? In addition, I’d like to know the pri