考向40 读后续写之动作、心理与对话描写 在英语读后续写中,利用恰当的动词进行符合特定情境的动作描写,真实准确地描述动作过程,以“动”传神,可以增强续写语篇的灵动性。与此同时可以适当利用契合人物性格特点的心理描写和对话描写, 使续写部分更为生动。 第一部分 动作描写 一、动作描写的3个原则 ①要准确:表现一个动作可以利用许多动词,但应恰当利用最准确的动词,刻画对应的动作。 ②有过程:展示人物个性的动作时,应通过细节描写展示出动作的过程,在续写时,应按动作的先后顺序叙述整个过程。 ③用修饰:在描写动作时,可利用各种状语,说明时间、地点、原因、伴随等情况,使动作描写更丰富。 二、动作描写常用的高分素材 与肢体语言相关的动作描写素材 (1)head ①She turned and headed for the door. 她转身朝门走去。 ②He buried/put/held his head in hands, greatly annoyed. 他双手抱头,非常生气。 ③Many people in the audience nodded in agreement. 许多观众点头表示赞同。 ④I fell asleep as soon as my head hit the pillow. 头一碰枕头我就睡着了。 ⑤He hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame. 他羞愧地低下了头。 (2)face ①Her face paled with fright. 她吓得脸都白了。 ②A bright smile appeared on/spread across/crossed his face. 他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。 ③Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present. 我给她礼物时,她的脸上焕发出了光彩。 (3)cheek ①Color rushed/flooded/rose to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched. 意识到有人在看她,她顿时涨红了脸。 ②He felt his cheeks burning with shame. 他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。 ③Her cheeks were wet with tears. 她泪流满面。 (4)eye ①He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning. 听到门把转动的声音,他向门那边看去。 ②Tina squeezed her eyes shut and bit her lip. 蒂娜闭上双眼,咬了咬嘴唇。 ③She looked at her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully. 她直视父亲的眼睛,诚实地回答了他的问题。 ④She tried to sit up, her eyes fixed on Joan's face. 她试图坐起来,双眼紧盯着琼的脸。 ⑤I felt tears well up in my eyes. 我感到泪水在眼里涌出来。 (5)mouth ①Our mouths dropped open in surprise. 我们惊奇地张大了嘴。 ②My mouth started watering when I smelled the food. 闻到食物的香味,我开始流口水了。 ③My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office. 我走进她的办公室时,紧张得心都提到嗓子眼了。 (6)hand ①She took the child's hand and helped him climb the steps. 她拉住孩子的手牵着他爬上台阶。 ②He reached for her hand and held it tightly. 他伸手抓住她的手并紧紧握住。 ③She shrugged and spread her hands. “That's all I can tell you.” 她耸耸肩,摊开双手说:“我只能告诉你这么多了。” ④She shivered, rubbing her hands together fiercely. 她一边颤抖,一边使劲搓着双手。 ⑤Her hands sho