人教专题33 读后续写之如何构思故事情节-2023年高考英语一轮复习《考点?题型 ?技巧》精讲与精练高分突破系列（通用）（解析版）.docx

专题33 读后续写之如何构思故事情节
《考点•题型 •技巧》
考点导航
一、情节拓展方法1：选择关键词
1.关键词语
blow 吹
howl 咆哮
crash 碰撞
stir 搅动
darken 使变黑
envelope 信封，包裹
gloomy 阴郁的
dip 蘸
pour 泼
sunshine /sunlight 阳光
breeze 微风
dim 昏暗的
faint 微弱的
winding 蜿蜒的
frighten 是某人害怕
chilling 寒冷的
thunder 雷，打雷
lightening 闪电
frosty 寒冷的
melt 融化
2.常用短语
be bathed in 沐浴在
amber-like sunshine 琥珀色的阳光
stretch off 延伸
凉爽清新的风cool and refreshing breeze
落日the setting sun
stroll down the street在街上漫步
the first ray of sunlight第一缕阳光
flood into涌入
gentle breeze微风
多雨的季节a rainy season
暴风雨之夜a stormy night
在茫茫大雨中in the blinding rain
在春天温暖的阳光里
in the warm spring sunshine
难以忍受的热unbearable hot
放晴了clear up
木日光浴bathe in the sunshine
一个偏僻的小村庄
a small village off the map
离海滨仅咫尺之遥
be dotted with 点缀着
二、情节拓展方法2：景色特征烘托人物心情
（一）阳光明媚的景色烘托生命美好与心情的愉悦
（二）暴风骤雨的场景烘托心情的抑郁
（三）烦闷焦躁的景色烘托心理的急躁等
（四）凄风苦雨与狂风暴雨烘托恐惧、阴冷与害怕
三、情节拓展方法3：精细化用语再现场景与心理的交织
（一）细节描述之“describe a peaceful scene”
（二）细节描述之“describe stormy weather”
（三）Good setting description for appreciation (佳“景”赏析)
四、情节拓展方法4：四季与自然景观的描写的精细化
（五）早中晚场景举例
读后续写的情节构思是续写成功与否的关键点之一。而在续写中，侧面描写的作用不容忽视。运用侧面描写，可以对人物进行多角度映照和多层次烘托，人物的描写就会达到“横看成岭侧成峰”的丰富境界。 侧面描写有“以旁面写正面”、“以对面写正面”、“以反面写正面”三种方法。如果从一个侧面去描写，人物形象往往单薄。如果从多个侧面去描写，人物形象就容易丰满。在写作中，我们可以尝试以下几种侧面烘托法：景物烘托法——通过对自然景物的描绘，来烘托人物心情；他人反映法——听听他人的反映，去了解主人公的个性特征；借人写人法——通过对受影响者的刻画，间接地表现主人公的思想品质。
【题型分析】
7. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Harry was afraid of the wind, I blew of his hat. I whistled under his door. It made the iron fence murmur scary music.
“How can anyone be afraid of the wind?” asked Harry's friend Antony many times. Harry shrugged. Antony always comforted him and encouraged him. Sometimes that made Harry feel better. But not for long.
On windy days Harry sod at his window and watched Antony riding his bike, whose hair flew in the wind. He watched his friend playing cheerfully in the wind, wishing he weren't afraid.
One day Antony came to Harry's house to play. “Look at my glider(滑翔机),” said Antony. “It doe