人教版61 中考作文题型之材料类 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）.docx

61 中考作文题型之材料类
2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）
相关话题写作概述
材料作文，顾名思义，需要首先对材料进行理解与提炼，对其主题、细节等有一定程度的把握，在此基础上，方能写好文章。同时，在写作中切忌抄袭原材料，在引用时需有相应变化。-般而言，其写作顺序是:引用材料提出观点或想法一论述总结。
相关话题作文写作示例指导
（一）
题目
Write at least 60 words about the topic“A one day outing". (请以“一日外出活动”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
The following situation is necessary for your writing:
A group of students are coming to your school for an educational visit. And this Saturday,you are expected to go for a one-day outing with two of them. Please plan a visit, tell us whereto go, what to do, and add your reason. Please make your outing exciting and meaningful
分析
1.既然是one day outing,就必须要注意在时间与地点上的限制。
2. "plan a visit"说明全文的时态与“现在”或“将来”相关。
3.始终注意材料中的划线部分，所设计的路线或活动必须有趣且有意义。
初稿
Speaking of a one-day outing, I will invite them to pay a visit to the Bund. When we look at the old and western-style buildings, we can discover the impact of western culture on China. By contrast, when we turn around, the tall and modern buildings may leave a deep impression on us. Since the buildings near the Bund show the history and cultural development of Shanghai, the outing I have planned must be exciting and meaningful.
点评:整篇****作言简意赅地说明了该生准备带来访学生去外滩游玩的计划。全文用大量篇幅描写了外滩的景致，似乎与计划相关。然而，若我们进一步思考则会发现， 此文有偏题之嫌。既然选择游览外滩，写作内容更应关注来访学生在外滩的所见所闻及其他们的感受，而非一味地介绍外滩建筑。不仅如此，exciting 和meaningful两词，应通过描述有