Every second brings a fresh beginning, every hour holds a new promise, every night dreams can bring hope, and every day is what we choose to make it. 应用文 Writing 4(申请信) 应用文写作 WRITING 4 (2021·吉林省长春外国语学校高一上期中) 假定你是高一学生李华,你从学校网站(the school’s website)上得知学校模联(Model UN)要招募(recruit)新成员。请给负责该工作的Ms. Wang写一封信,申请加入模联。要点如下: 1. 个人基本信息; 2. 学****情况和英语水平; 3. 优势或特长。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Ms. Wang, I’m Li Hua._______________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Li Hua 审 题 分 析 思 路 点 拨 本篇书面表达的体裁属于应用文之申请信。要求你给学校模联(Model UN)负责人Ms.Wang写一封信,申请加入学校模联。 第一部分:说明写信目的(即申请加入学校模联)和消息来源。还可以说明申请的原因。 第二部分:先介绍个人基本信息(年龄、性别等),再说明自己的学****情况和英语水平。在介绍时,要突出自己的优点,然后从其他方面对自己的优势或特长进行补充。所有的介绍都是为帮助自己申请成功而服务。 第三部分:表达自己的愿望,恳请对方考虑自己的申请,期盼得到对方的答复。 Dear Ms. Wang, I’m Li Hua. ①Learning on the school’s website that Model UN is recruiting new members, I am writing to apply to join it. I’m a 16-year-old schoolgirl/schoolboy who is friendly and outgoing, making me popular in school. ②Besides, I’m a top student in my class and have a good command of English, which will help me perform well in Model UN. And finally, politics just fascinates me and working as a diplomat has always been my dream job. Thus, ③I do have an urge to win this precious opportunity. ④I would be grateful if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Li Hua (99 words) 标准范文及评析 ①开头告知获取信息的来源,并表明写信目的,直截了当。 ②说明个人学****情况、英语水平、优势等。文中使用了一些高级词汇和句型,“Besides”“And finally”“Thus”等过渡词的使用使得整段内容衔接流畅。 ③表现对获得这次机会的渴望:“do”强调谓语动词,“urge”意为“强烈欲望”。 ④使用情态动词“would”“cou