Every second brings a fresh beginning, every hour holds a new promise, every night dreams can bring hope, and every day is what we choose to make it. 应用文 Writing 5(求助信) 应用文写作 WRITING 5 (2020·山东省烟台市高一下期中) 假定你是李华,最近你因为与同桌产生矛盾而苦恼,写信向英语报社“知心话栏目”求助,要点如下: 1. 写信目的; 2. 事件经过及你的感受; 3. 请求帮助。 注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Editor, I’m Li Hua, a high school student._____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 审 题 分 析 思 路 点 拨 本篇书面表达的体裁属于应用文之求助信。求助信用于写信人遇到困难或问题时,给对方写信希望得到帮助,获得解决问题的具体建议,从而最终解决问题。在求助信中要告知需要对方提供何种帮助,如为自己写推荐信、提供解决某一问题的办法等,不能只讲需要帮助,而全然不提需要对方做什么。另外,根据与写信对象的关系,在求助信中,有时要先进行简单的自我介绍(本篇已给出)。 本篇书面表达可以按照下面的思路来写: 开头:说明问题,即与同学发生了矛盾;表明写信目的,即就解决矛盾寻求对方的建议。 中间:介绍事件的起因或背景;矛盾导火索;处理方式或态度、结果、影响以及自身感受。 结尾:重申写作目的,表达渴望获得对方的帮助;期待得到对方的答复(已给出)。 Dear Editor, I’m Li Hua, a high school student. ①Recently a conflict occurred between my deskmate and me. I’m writing to ask for some advice on how to handle this situation. ②Last Thursday, our school held a sports meet. My deskmate and I both participated in the 100-meter race. ③I accidentally knocked him over when racing towards the finish line, injuring his right leg. Though I sincerely apologized to him, he refused to forgive me. Worse still, since then, he has been completely ignoring me, which makes me upset. ④With this always on my mind, I can’t concentrate on my studies. ⑤I’m at a total loss what to do. ⑥I’d appreciate it if you could help me out. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua (112 words) 标准范文及评析 ①简要说明遇到的情况:“a conflict between…and…”表示“……与……之间的矛盾”。 ②介绍事件发生的背景。 ③几个动词(短语)“knock over”“