高中英语人教第3部分 书面表达 层级3+第1讲　添加合理的细节.doc

第1讲　添加合理的细节
根据括号内的提示完成下列句子。
1．However, it seems that people are not aware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication between people. For example, more and more people are not paying attention to face­to­face communication(比如，很多人越来越不重视面对面的交流)．
2．At that moment, I became the focus of the whole class and I was full of great pride and confidence(我充满了自豪和自信)．
3．I suggest that the teacher select proper English films for us, thus making English learning more interesting(这样就使得我们的英语学****更加有趣)．
4．If possible(如果可能的话), I'll take part in some social activities so that I can know more about today's society(以便我能更多地了解当今社会)．
5．I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons. To my joy, they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me(令我高兴的是，他们进步很快而且他们的父母对我评价很高)．
6．Let's develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and try to make more contributions to the protection of the environment(尽力为环境保护做出更多贡献)．
在高考试题的书面表达的“注意”中明确要求：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。适当添加细节的方法具体如下：
1．列举具体的实例进行补充说明
①我要花一些时间和父母在一起。
I'll spend some time staying with my parents.
→I'll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them besides doing some housework.
②我看到了一些不良行为。
I found some bad behaviour.
→I found some bad behaviour. Some people scribbled on the wall; some played on the lawn and some threw rubbish everywhere.
③我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非