高中英语人教板块3 层级写作 1写作技巧篇 第5讲　让多彩作文提分.docx

第五讲　让多彩作文提分
层级十三 拓展成文的“五大方法”
近几年高考作文主要考查提纲类和(半)开放类作文，试题的开放性越来越强，如何将有限的提示信息拓展成100词左右的短文是重中之重的问题。下面主要介绍五种最有效的拓展成文法。
1.列举具体的实例进行补充说明
①我要花一些时间和父母在一起。
I’ll spend some time staying with my parents.
→I’ll spend some time staying with my parents，chatting with them and doing some housework.
②我看到了一些不良行为。
I found some bad behaviour.
→I found some bad behaviour.Some people scribbled on the wall; some played on the lawn and some threw rubbish everywhere.
2.增添相关信息的时间、地点等内容
我要去购物。
I’m going to do some shopping.
→I’m going to do some shopping in the supermarket and won’t be back until 5 o’clock in the afternoon .
3.增添事件的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容
①我将参加一些社会活动。
I will take part in some social activities.
→If possible，I will take part in some social activities so that I can know more about society.(条件，结果)
②我需要好好休息，我要做些阅读。
I need a good rest.I’ll do some reading.
→I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years.I’ll do some reading for fun，as well as for knowledge.(原因，目的)
③这部电影主要是关于我们学校的发展。
The film is mainly related to the development of our school.
→The film is mainly related to the development of our school，which will greatly help us students know the school’s history better and appeal to us to make contributions to our school’s development.(结果)
4.追加附加成分
在要点基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语(从句)、状语(从句)、非谓语动词、独立主格结构等。这样不仅增加了词数，而且使表达更清晰、准确，主题更突出。