人教考向48 应用文写作之道歉信和感谢信(解析版)-备战2022年高考英语.docx

考向48 应用文写作之道歉信和感谢信
道歉信
【写作示例】
假定你是李华, 与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店, 因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 表示歉意; 2. 说明原因; 3. 另约时间。
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
【考场审题】
Step 1: 精准审题　谋篇布局
人称
I (Li Hua), You(Bob)
时态
一般现在时, 一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题: 点明写作目的, 并表达歉意
主体段落: 说明致歉的原因
结尾: 再次致歉, 并另约时间
Step 2: 头脑风暴　字字珠玉
(1)美词: express my heartfelt apology; represent our school to do; available; as a result
(2)佳句: ①I can’t go with you as planned.
②I’m writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.
③How about going to the bookstore this Sunday.
Step 3: 斟酌词句　妙笔生花
要点1: 我很抱歉无法跟你一起去书店。
一般表达: I’m sorry that I can’t go with you to the bookstore.  
句式升级(高级词汇, 名词性从句, 分词作状语)
我诚挚地向你道歉, 这周五不能按计划和你去书店了。
I have to express my heartfelt apology to you that I can’t go with you to the bookstore this Friday as planned.  
要点2: 我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛。
一般表达: I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition.  
句式升级(定语从句, for引导的并列句)
我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛, 这对我非常重要, 因为我一直梦想有这样的机会代表我校参赛, 展示我们的实力。
I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which is of great importance to me, for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school.  
要点3: 这个周日去书店如何? 那时你是否有时间呢?
一般表达: How about going to the bookstore this Sunday? Will you be available then?  
句式升级(高级词汇, 意趣盎然)
Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookstore this Sunday?  
Step 4: 衔接过渡　斐然成篇
【参考范文】
Dear Bob,
How are you doing? I’m indeed very sorry that I can’t go to the bookstore with you this Friday as planned.
How I wish I could go with you! However, I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which is of great importance to me, for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school. As a result, I have to miss our appointment.
Please accept my sincere apology from the bottom of my heart. Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookstore this