考向51 应用文写作之祝贺信和报道类写作
祝贺信
【写作示例】
假定你是李华, 得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲, 并给他写一封祝贺信, 要点如下:
1. 天天练****讲汉语, 从不会到流利, 终于成功;
2. 继续努力, 有机会来中国留学;
3. 希望见面和交流。
注意: 1. 词数80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: “汉语桥”中文演讲比赛“Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest
【考场审题】
Step 1: 精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
第一人称 (I), 第二人称(you)
时态
一般现在时; 一般过去时
段落布局:
开头点题: 表达祝贺
主体段落: 成功的原因并进行鼓励
结尾: 再次表达祝贺
Step 2: 头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词: express my congratulations, opportunity, communicate
(2)佳句:
①As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”.
②Going on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China.
Step 3: 斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1: 正如谚语所说: “成功属于有准备的人”。
一般表达: There is a saying going like this, “Everything comes to him who waits”.
句式升级(定语从句)
As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”.
要点2: 如果你继续努力学****汉语, 你就会有机会来中国学****
一般表达:
If you go on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China.
句式升级(分词短语作状语)
Going on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China.
Step 4: 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest.
I know that you were not good at Chinese at first. However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day. As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”. Finally, you succeeded! In my mind, this match is very difficult for a foreign student. So I’m so surprised that you become champion of this competition. Going on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China. At last, I hope to see you and communicate with you.
Sincere congratulations to you again!
Yours,
Li Hua
报道类
【写作示例】
假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5千米越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:
1. 参加人员;
2. 跑步路线: 从校门口到南山脚下;
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
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