19 书面表达-读后续写 备战2023高考英语考试易错题（人教版）（解析版）.docx

专题19 书面表达 读后续写
备战2023高考英语考试易错题（新高考专用）（解析版）
一 易错题类型

【易错题01】 内容
段首第一句话实际限制了续写的主题，续写的内容不要与段首出现行文逻辑上的冲突。读不懂原文，如不认识bear spray, 不理解a bright cloud enveloped the animal, 没有理清任务关系，由于阅读能力直接影响到续写的发挥。还有的考试大面积抄写试卷中的阅读理解或完型填空等处的语句；还有一些考生描写心理活动和场景过多，缺乏具体描写，导致故事内容不连贯，不完整。
【易错题02】 语言不准确
考生偏向于刻意追求高级，新颖的词汇，强行运用复杂句型等语法结构，而忽略了与原文语言环境的符合度和连贯度。同时出现拼写错误等，不能结合原文给出漂亮的转折，起伏和故事性结尾，与读后续写的全新创作宗旨相违背。
【易错题03】 篇章结构
读后续写评分标准：先根据整体情况对文章进行定档，然后依据该档的相应要求来确定或调节档次，最后打分。打分主要从续写内容、词汇语法、篇章结构三方面考虑。
【命题分析】
年份
主题
出处
2022.6
患病男孩自强之“跑”
新高考I &II
2022.1
迷糊学渣与傲娇学霸
浙江高考
2021.6
“我”的打工薪水
浙江高考
2021.6
母亲节给妈妈做饭
新高考I&II
2021.1
少女南瓜卡头
浙江高考
2020.7
爱心帮助他人
山东高考
2020.7
拍照意外遇熊
浙江高考
2020.1
抚平狗狗心伤
浙江高考
2018.6
度假骑马迷路
浙江高考
2017.11
健忘妈妈趣事
浙江高考
【重点考查】
与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；
内容的丰富性；
应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
上下文的连贯性。
【重点考查】
仔细审题，字数限制，使用关键词语，续写段落的首句提示，做到“心中有数”。
精读文章，确定文章线索。如：who, when, where, why, what, how.
回扣原文，揣摩续写思路。确定续写段落的内容。
拟写草稿，修改错词病句。注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
最后，务必做到“字迹工整，清晰，卷面美观”。
典例剖析
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awak