人教版高中英语考点43 读后续写08 脱险类（火灾、洪水、迷路篇）（解析版）.docx

考点43 读后续写08 脱险类（火灾、洪水、迷路篇）（解析版）
【命题解读】
读后续写中会遇到火灾，水灾，森林迷路等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成了一定的威胁的情节，我们就把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型。在往年高考真题中，曾经就考过三次：拍摄北极熊遇险；父子骑马迷路；骑车游玩遇狼脱险。
【思维导图】
救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）
1、恶劣环境
（1）一到晚夏，池塘就会被绿色的起泡浮渣覆盖。有时候，池塘里冒出一阵强烈的难闻的味道。In late summer, the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum（起泡的浮渣）. Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it.
（2）在池塘中间，冰面忽然露出了一条裂缝。
In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack.
（3）空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。A thick burning smell filled the air. 
2、负面情绪：害怕
(1) Watching the shore in the distance, I felt powerless(无力的) as if we were broken tiny boats at the mercy of strong waves.
(2) Exhausted and cold, the thought that we might die here flashed across my mind，
which made me quiver with an uncontrollable terror/horror/fright(难以控制地发抖)
Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body (在身体涌动)
救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负）
1、.挣扎努力
Tom looked thoughtful(若有所思)
“We need to think out a way!” I muttered (喃喃自语), scratching my head.(绞尽脑汁)
...,We swam tooth and nailspared no effort to
tooth and nail
spared no effort to
(全力以赴地).
2. 救人有关的惊险场面描写
(1) The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water.
(2) I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass(像玻璃一样破裂). （浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）
(3)As the coat became completely wet, it dragged me down(把我拖下水). I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.（浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）
3.实施救援的过程
“帮我把西蒙斯弄下车！”诺伍德对惊慌失措的朋友们大声喊道。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
“Help me get Simmons out of the car!” Norwood yelled loudly to her friends, who were left in a panic. 诺伍德和朋友们把西蒙斯从车里拉了出来，把他放在一个安全并且离车有点远的地方。
尽管紧张而焦虑，诺伍德努力让自己镇静下来，对西蒙斯进行了急救。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
Nervous and anxious, Norwood struggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid to Simmons.
诺伍德和她的朋友们把西蒙斯放到平躺的位置，打开了她的