专题37 读后续写08 成长型(解析版) 目录 专题37 读后续写08 成长型(解析版) 1 Part 1命题解读 1 Part 2思维导图 2 Part 3成长类故事构造“三部曲” 2 第一步:成长前的苦恼(负面情绪塑造) 2 第二步:成长中(蜕变塑造) 4 第三步:成长后的升华(喜悦+感激+升华) 4 Part 4 成长类场景描写 5 一、学****知识而成长 5 二、发挥天赋促成长 5 三、追逐梦想而成长 6 四、克服困难促而成长 6 Part 5 模拟演练 7 1. (2022·广东韶关·一模) 7 2. (2022·广东茂名·二模) 9 3. (2022·广东梅州·一模) 12 4. (2022·湖南·模拟预测) 14 5. (2022·河北·邯郸一中模拟预测) 17 6. (2022·江苏泰州·一模) 19 7. 读后续写模拟专练01 22 8. 读后续写模拟专练02 26 Part 6 名师精讲 30 01 ---酸奶 30 02 ---打屁股教育 33 03 ---不要嘲笑别人 36 04---不以貌取人 39 Part 1命题解读 成长类的故事,是高考读后续写常见的一个主题,比如2021年的高考“我”的工资。什么叫“成长”,主要指改变观念和改变态度两类。 Part 2思维导图 Part 3成长类故事构造“三部曲” 第一步:成长前的苦恼(负面情绪塑造) 1、孤独 I never made friends easily(从不容易交朋友), and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. (2021年4月宁波二模) 伤心 我在口袋里什么也没发现,这个事实就像一把长矛刺进我的心脏,立刻开始流血。 I found nothing in my pocket, a fact that seemed like a spear piercing into my heart which started to bleed immediately. (2021年4月宁波二模) 看了看周围,我焦急地几乎哭了起来。(2021年4月宁波二模) Looking around anxiously, I almost burst into crying. 就在我崩溃的时候,克劳利带领的一群男孩从我身边走过(2021年4月宁波二模) Just at the time I broke down, a group of boys led by Crawley passed me. 3、惭愧 1. She was overwhelmed / overcome/ consumed with guilt and shame (被内疚和羞愧淹没). (2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试) 2. Suddenly she came alive(精神就为之一振),waving her arthritic(关节炎的) hands.(2021广二模) 3. A wave of guilt swept over me(一阵恐惧向我袭来) and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.(2020届山东省滨州市高三第二次模拟英语试题) 4、嘲笑 他们大声地笑着,像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表啊!”(2021年4月宁波二模) They laughed loudly with Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!” 5、绝望 我妈妈不让我带,”我撒谎,绝望在我心中沸腾。(2021年4月宁波二模) “My mother wouldn't let me bring it,” I lied, desperation boiling inside me. 6、紧张 1. Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crossed (她的手指交叉着). (2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试) 2. She told the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / pounding/ pumping like a drum(她的心跳得像打鼓一样